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i hear her
crying,
bleeding
dying.
the knife in my hand
gleaming
dripping,
People are coming,
but i no longer care,
i hide away as the first person comes around the corner
she turns to see
blood
footprints
MY footprints
i see her start to follow them
my body prepares to fight
the knife comes up
i can hear her breathing
as she turns the corner
Knife drawn i turn to face her
she freezes for a split second
a split second too long
i hear her
crying
i see her
bleeding
dying
this time i wipe my feet on her hair
to make sure noone sees my footprints
as two kills is 1 more than needed
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death by alanda

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this idea just came to me no idea why lol
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bobmeh Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2005
yup, morbid. its good, its really good, but its still worrying that u come up with these things! u're not secretly a serial killer are you? xxx
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alanda Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2005
oh no you've got me :P of course i aint a serial killer- just the way ma mind works ;P thats probably scarier than actually being a serial kller but never mind lol :)
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sasuraitenshi Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2005
morbid again!, but i really like this, it's odd but really well written. where do you get your inspiration? xXx
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alanda Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2005
thanks- no idea where the idea came rom but thought it was a gd 1 so gave it a go xXx
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